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11-30-2005, 08:36 PM
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not really about dragons just some love poem i wrote.
THE QUESTION ANSWERED
" I asked God for a flower, he gave me a bouquet I asked God for a minute, he gave me a day I asked God for true love, he gave me that too I asked for an angel and he gave me you." Next LOVE IN A ROSE "All the love that history knows, is said to be in every rose. Yet all that could be found in two, is less than what I feel for you." and lastly LOVE LIKE GOLD "Love is like a lump of gold, Hard to get, and hard to hold. Of all the girls I've ever met, You're the one I can't forget. I do believe that God above, Created you for me to love. He chose you from all the rest, Because he knew I would love you best." dont give me grife or i will delete this |
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11-30-2005, 10:19 PM
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Ethereal Dragon
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: sailing the high seas
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Well i thought they were really good, twin dragon kings! Very creative...
(btw, what's "grife"?)
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11-30-2005, 10:25 PM
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Ethereal Dragon
Join Date: Sep 2005
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im pretty sure he ment grief....and yes I like them as well
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11-30-2005, 10:27 PM
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Ethereal Dragon
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: sailing the high seas
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"May the Evil be washed away and the light shine through on this wretched land of chaos" "Do not gain the world and lose your soul; wisdom is better than silver and gold...." [font=Comic Sans MS]
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12-01-2005, 01:15 PM
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bite me :D
my friends thought so too. |
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12-01-2005, 02:53 PM
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Ethereal Dragon
Join Date: Oct 2005
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there verry good I think love poems are fun too just know too much to write love poems wile keeping knowlodge safe... oh well
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12-19-2005, 09:43 AM
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Adult Dragon
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: In my Mind.
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GREAT!!! i love that love poem....i'm only able to write poems when they....well i don't write the poems......they write themselves and i just put them on paper....they just come in a random times.......usually during times when i'm sad.....
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12-19-2005, 10:12 AM
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Rotten Teeth
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Somewhere near, yet far, far away...
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I'm sorry Twin Dragon Kings, your poetry isn't good... It's unbelievably fantastic!!! There beautiful! I haven't been in awe over a poem for quite some time, that streak has been broken. They really "speak" to me, if you know what I mean.
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12-20-2005, 01:01 PM
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:o thanks :o
two more poems, enjoy. I asked God for a flower, he gave me a bouquet I asked God for a minute, he gave me a day I asked God for true love, he gave me that too I asked for an angel and he gave me you. and I wrote your name in the sky, but the wind blew it away. I wrote your name in the sand, but the waves washed it away. I wrote your name in my heart, and forever it will stay. |
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12-26-2005, 06:38 PM
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Tranquil Dragon
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Alberta, Canada
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Thats amazing! Much better than my own work.
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