the coming land of now

[blackheart3]

angery for our dieing land
hatred for our posioned air
objects of earth and fire glide by
rain of filth fall opun our lands
as we count the centerys to we die
our forests burned our homes stoled solled
our hatchlings killed by thouse criminals
day by day they pass by
unoticing me infront of them
unoticing the lost land
unoticing the dead that line the earth
raising land towards the sky
for resons we know not why
as the earth is tented grey
and the sky tinted red
and blue is lost in oceons
both deap and shollow
we wait and weap
untle the plains doors open
untle the shadows clear
untle death shuts not the gate or soul
wait we well here
in the darkness for evermore



know its a strange perspective but what do you think

[Draconis Infernvs]

I think it very good, it is true

[Demondragon]

I like it. Very thought-provoking.

[blackheart3]

driftinglonedragon- thank you, and yes it is true, and Im sorry I cant give you better quility work the proublem seams to be when I try to put the poem down on paper most of the ones I have made the really good ons I cant seam to translate onto the paper it makes me feal like creating my own luanguege to use instead of this one.

[Dragon spirit]

Where are you from?
And i liked it its true......

[blackheart3]

I was born in wash. DC and live in virgina and there is verry little hatred in my "outer life" but I on occasion have memerys that never happened and not so long ago I used to follow a code one wich as far as I can tell seams to be a similer code to what a dragon he has clamed to have "met" has. unfortanantly I have recently in my haist to keep up with the outer world forgoten this code and hope I can refind it.

[Dragon spirit]

I wish you luck my friend.......

Im from the cold sweden......

[blackheart3]

Ok thanks I just got to work with another too and if they are good eneugh Ill post them they are sort of a followup of the first one. Im thinking of making this set only have three, What has bean to come, what is, and what willn come too be. the third one will proubely be the hardest.

[Dragon spirit]

Looks foreward 2 it.........

[blackheart3]

I know this peace is must ruogher then the other and I apolegise for how long it took me, I was afk for awile but heres II.

watching from a distant point
as they put down there swords
and decare false peace
I watch as massive veils water and wind
from the sea push through there bericades
a hidden war ignites
they fight with sticks and wight panels with lies and roars
what is grey seams then in there eyes balack and wight
sides are chosen battle won and battle lost
unoticing there true fate
through countless battles they enddore
against there false enemy prey to time and nature
they turn there intentions to thoughs who need help
not to help but to watch
wile still at this time there is good even they can do
they dream of making a defrence
and spend there lifetime trying to find out how
not seeing that the anser lies not infront but along side them
they take that wich is simple and make it complicated
they work at puzzles comming near there goal
before reaching it turning and retrying
we try what we can too help
but our power comes from how little is known
and we must help from the shadows in the forest
and from our linked minds
we help that which we hate
that which has stealed from use
and even after we help steal they still do
we wach as ugly black fogs fill are sky
and in the shadows you may see us
next too the old oak
behind the stone of ruins
forever mistook

p.s. please excuse any spelling mistakes I am mearly taking notes of what I here myself say and these are quit rugh translations from my head to the paper and I dont beleave in unessary editing of suchh works as poetry for an edited work is but a lie

[blackheart3]

heres the third one I have tried to make it a bit more up beat please exuse anything that seams uncertan becous few is known about them and without true past I can seak no futere, also please excuse the latness of the poem Ive bean verry busy. well here is #3.

our misery shall cuntinue
for not much more of a time
for the fafullment well soon comlete
the proficy come a end
but though the end is near
we have not bean brought to fear
for when end comes
the beggening will come with it
thouse who fear well stay
and thouse without it will go
to the place weave always bean
to the awakening of neather new or old
for what will come has bean
and what will be
the final puzzle piece placed
thouse of them who join us
in this resting place of good
will keep all his ways
and do what he must
but without ego he will travel
for in the name of good he will speak
and pass down to his children
the knowlogde he will gain
even they will live beyound what we have
in the past
for the prophecy will be profilled
when he is found the end will come
and may all go on without fear
of what shall come to be

[Dragon spirit]

all three really is true!
you are really good........

[blackheart3]

thank you Dragon spirit these repersent what I have learned from what they have spoken that I am alowed to share the third one is more or less a pridiction then somthing in set knowlodge but for me they all seam equel in ways of there own.These as I just said are not the best works but the ones I am able and feal its ok to transfer to paper. and Im going to take a brake form writing poetry and start learning how to draw dragons. I might also write a story. best of luck on your own works. on secound thought I dont think I will right a story at the time the reson being that though I understand alot I know verry little.

[blackheart3]

here this isnt part of the set of three but I dicided to make it anyway becuse I couldnt think of a new Idea for a picture

I wach as the days go by
as thouse around me fall and die
though from human eyes I look
And through human mind I think
there is still somthing else in here
it shows me the way too go
and when Im down or sad
it wispers in my ear
the lost poems of the past
and when Im over confedent
I brings me down too earth
with the lost poems of sadness
and when I am where I need too be
It keeps me on the road
by telling me stories of old
in my head I can see its door
made of trees I do not know
when it opens but a crack
pure energy comes out through it
it glows a perfect wight
and speaks a luanguge of old
and when I let it in
nothing seams impossible
and what unhapppenes
I can leave behind
I keep so that others can live without

[Demondragon]

*is speechless* ...Such talent...Wow.

[blackheart3]

thank you demondragon really glad that people enjoy my works I only share them here though I might start to show my friends evently but when I do I would like to have plenty becous last year I made a comic and then I gave it too my friend next thing I know theres all these people asking for another and another and then you start having to worry about how I need this one in by tommorow... thank goodness thats over well thanks again.

[Demondragon]

No problem! You're writing is worth reading! :)

[blackheart3]

how much better do you think works such as these wold need to be to make some money off a set. Just wondering

[Draconis Infernvs]

they would need some revising... but not too much

[blackheart3]

I know this isnt as good as the others but this is a breif discription of somthing that has happened recently that I find sad

once a time not far from know
In the years that past
there was a person who I loved
and she loved me in return
then came a helpless fellow
who I helped and showed kindness
then when the fellow need not help
he showed me his true nature
and ruended my balongings
he trespaced stole and lied
chance after chance I gave him
and when I gave him no more
he got angry and took from me what matters
my love julia
and then the spring turned too summer
and he left for his homeland
leaving me with nothing but hope in my hand
then when summer turned away and left
and I met her once again
she had fallen in love with another
one who was carrupt
and though anger filled my body
I blamed not him
for what was I to take from an inocent
what has from me taken
so day by day has gone along
and I have sean here every one
but regret I have for helping that old fox
who stole and fled away
petty I have for the next who crosses him on ther way

[blackheart3]

I know this is short and it took awile but everythings the same day by day over here and theres not any outside insperation so I have to hope I can find somthing I can start with and am willing too talk about. Ps I did notice the errors in spelling but diceded not to change them


It wasnt to this day
that I realised what Id do
if I where to fall to heavens gates
in this verry time and place
I think about how Id stay behind
in this human body and rechid time
to help all thouse who seek to fufill
the prophecy of a dragon long ago
Id let happeness sit and wait
for now is not the time to die
for dragons quest draws near a end
and forwword we must ride
ahead of them
to prepare alll those for comings day
and light the way
for the day is drawing near
there will be the days of darkness
when the day arrives
but the darkness soon will fall away
to another place light will fall
and may them be at last revieled

[Demondragon]

Man, you are really talented! The way you write....I can't think of any word in any language to describe how well you write! Very impressive. :)

[Dragon spirit]

I agree with demon......

You can truly write.....

and dont worry about the spelling
we dont really care about that

[blackheart3]

Thanks you two I was begening to think nobody would respond.

[Draconis Infernvs]

some of the things you wrote I have written before as well....

[blackheart3]

Not suprised am I drift. I dont play with words in my heads or try to change them or anything this is simply a recording of how I origonaly tell the story when I think of it this is a origonal work strate from my mind no revesion or anything. Though I know much more words I could use hear I prefer the challenge of making a good poem using only basic words.

[blackheart3]

Anyways there are only so many words.

[blackheart3]

Heres a short one about a warrier who lived in the end of times past just felt like it.

opun his door I stand
sword in my hand
night and day I await
for the gate
to leave its silent state
I thrust my sword
to meat the ground
where it well forever lay
my victories worth not
and my lifeswork forgot
I sit and lay
and wach the flowers sway
wach as days pass away
as flowers die and are once more
in my final resting place I lay
Waching the moons silent face
leaves and comes without discrace
yet even there I am nomore
but dust on the moving wind

[Demondragon]

*is speechless* Wow, now that is GOOD! You should seriously consider becoming a published writer (if you're not already) because you are really good with words and describing things in poetic ways! Your imagery rocks, too! :D

[blackheart3]

thank you demon dragon Im really glad you like my work:). and no I am not a writer, as a career that is, thanks again.

[Dragon spirit]

I like this one 2 Nate!
its really good....

[blackheart3]

thank you spirit:)

[Eelukathe]

there both execellent where did you learn to write like that

[blackheart3]

I didnt I really wasnt as good a writer awile ago I just tried to write a poem on here, these set of poems where the first Ive wroten in alonge time and somehow things just come to me. I just write the first couple words and the rest comes the hard part for me is trying too keep up.

[Demondragon]

You are truly gifted if words just come to you naturally....My problem is that whenever I try to write creative things like poems or stories, I can never even get the first line written, much less finish it!

You have a real talent here; I look forward to your next work. :)

[blackheart3]

this is not as good as the other ones but I felt I didnt write anything in awile so a made myself write it like all my others is made without any format or anything just write as I think well hope you like it more than me:).

as I gase across the blue desert
from up on top the cliff
I see the orange light reach out
and colors fill the sky
and darkened are the jagged rocks
wich line that down bellow
seconds pass in silence
as creatures lay
to welcome the coming of the day
when they will rise again
darkness fills the earth with black
alumanated only by the glowing sky
as darkness falls opun the land
they wake up to welcome the birth
of another night to on this earth
they play hunt and eat
they sing the tales of there lost
and then as light comes there way
from over the old bay
they skitter back to there homes
and as there day ends a new one begans.

[RedDragon5]

That's very good.

[blackheart3]

thank you red

[RedDragon5]

You are quite good at that.

[blackheart3]

ya I picked a random setting and wrote about it its not what I usally do but why not.

[blackheart3]

sorry I know this is not my style but I did it anyways too make me feal better hope you like it.


many a trees has fallen
and many lives are lost
and maybe soon there will be no trees
and maybe soon no lakes
to play in and wach the rolling hills
and see the golden gates
and soon maybe the sun will fall
not to rise again
and the lands pluaged with darkness
for now and ever more
death may come to us good and bad alike
for all is gone and none is left
for us to gaze opun

[RedDragon5]

It's very good. Different, but good.

[blackheart3]

thank you Im not use too writing that stlye Im always happy and optimistic it just dosnt come as natrualy still is easy though just not as easy.

[blackheart3]

here one I decided to write I tried to make it realistic as possible.

waching there ranks come forth
sweat pouring accross my face
I stand waiting for the sound too come
waiting for battles mighty call
wepon firmly in my hand
I stand
battles call rings through the air
I run forth towards the forest of enemies
trailed by the roar of shout I run
each step bringing me closer to my fate
as they draw near I began to fear
but as we collied no fear resides
I draw my sword forth from my side
and lift it high above my head
and as my section begans our fight
I bring it down to meat a head
but in my haist I did not block
and to hes luck my arm cut
but none matters for I will die
if I chose to end my fight
so I bring my sword up from the ground
and block a blow blood spurting out my arm
but even as hes allie draws blood from my side
I still fight without care for my life
I bring my sword down as if to strike
he puts hes up to block
I step fowword to the right
and wach as my blade goes through his neck
and then blackness came
my head screemed in searing pain
not knowing wether I will live or die I wait
waching the empty black space
a voice rings in my head
dont worry your not dead

[blackheart3]

this ones alot shorter than the last and though its not that good I hope you will like what it says even if it dosnt sound good.

why most good sit and wach
as evil is praised without second thought
as that of good sees the evil
thouse around see its reward
they carry him opun there shoulders
too where there own destruction resides
they help him overpower there pretectors
and clear his path from traps
when good rises too save them
they push him far away
why must that of good walk alone
too help thouse who fight against it

[Demondragon]

It's very good, blackheart. And true, also....

[blackheart3]

the first few lines,If you where to die for resons I know not whyopun whos grave would you wish too lie, are somthing that goes through my head over and over agiain wile I write poems somtimes. The rest I just tried to add on becou I thought it was to short.

If you where to die
for resons I know not why
opun whos grave would you wish too lie
and to what time would you die
and if you die and die you shall
who will you give your soul
and for whos side will you die
will death be brave sacrifice
or shot wile running away
who in the end will you worship
and who will you fear
will you in the end hate
or will you love

[Caelestis]

Sorry, but I can't stand this style. Its way to defeatist. There is light and joy in the world too!

[blackheart3]

I right this style not becous I dont see the light but becous I see too much of it the happy things arnt as good without contrast. besides it not negitive it just is its not positive eather for by accepting death you accept life for one isnt without the other. Also its meant too get you thinking I mewan honestly when I hear it I dont even see the negetive part I just think about it and think about the anser.

[blackheart3]

on the behalf of Caelestis I have dicided to do a bit brighter one and here it is

I sit on the rolling hills
and wach the slowly spining mills
and breath the salt filled air
as I wach the birds fly by
and lison to the breaking waves
as red fills the sky
I feal the cold mist dampening my face
and wach as the orange sphere
begans to rise from the sea
and wach above as
a masive blue veil covers the star filled sky
and wach as segals fill the bay
thinking about the new born day

[Demondragon]

They're both really good, blackheart. I liked the previous/darker one more though...it was deep and meaningful.

[blackheart3]

I understand demondragon just had to do the other one for the people who dont like the darker ones. Also whene I write thease it seams as if half of me is dreaming waching the character of my poem wile the other half is writing about what I see its just a thing I do I can visuilize any thing I already sean verry well into new seanen.

[blackheart3]

heres another could of made it lounger but school starting soon and Ill have to start getting ready so here it is

I sat there on the darkness plane
real or false I not to this day
but still I sat there opun the darkness plane
waiting the hours away
night or day without a meaning
fealings nothing but pain
without purpose or meaning I looked out
trying not to shout
but in the end I just sat there
opun the darkness plain

[Demondragon]

Hmm, i like it, but it's not your best. I like the other ones better. But that's just my insignificant opinion. You don't have to listen to it if you don;t want to....

[blackheart3]

I know that one was really rushed, I had only a few seounds to jot it down I had to get ready for school then finish some reading that was due today, you really cant rush a poem and expect it to show the same meaning and emotions that you expected it would.

[Demondragon]

That is true, but i would really like to see some more of your work...when you have time, of course.

[blackheart3]

Yes some more work wold be really nice
to see to taist to eat to lie
wile lessoning to great work of old
from the great library wich I hold
to feal the soothing tast of sweat lemanade
wile hearing the dear old sound of poetry
running down the lightbrown page
to wach as you eyes skim down this page
as you read this line by line
and saver every word
for poems are of great value
for the fealing they carry are great
and even this poem of itself
can express fealling opun this blank slate

[Demondragon]

Wow. You didn't just write that off the top of your head, did you? Cuz that's really good.

[blackheart3]

actualy yes I did, thank you.

[Demondragon]

actualy yes I did, thank you.

Really?! You never cease to amaze me, blackheart.

[blackheart3]

thank you it was more or less a joke though the Idea of a poem discribing itself and how your reading it.
It anestly dosnt take more than a few secound to write a poem for me but as you might say

The time for poetry comes and goes
without wind gueding its lovely rose
it seams never to stop or to wait
for the writers to finish there plate
it is without time for it is now
and foreever it will be so
never will it have to go
without the writer saying so

just made that one up too

[Demondragon]

Grrr...! :D I wish I could spew out poems like you do!

[blackheart3]

And I wish I knew how to teach you how it just happens I pick a topic that feals right Put down a few words and then it all starts coming out before I know it I have a poem Ive always seen thing defrentyl than most people in some places it helps and in others it makes things harder. Hey at least you a good drawer.:)

[Demondragon]

And I wish I knew how to teach you how it just happens I pick a topic that feals right Put down a few words and then it all starts coming out before I know it I have a poem Ive always seen thing defrentyl than most people in some places it helps and in others it makes things harder. Hey at least you a good drawer.:)

Yeah, I guess i have something to be proud of....But you, my friend, are quite talented.

[blackheart3]

thank you know if only I could be better with the other side of my brain Id be all set:D.

[blackheart3]

heres one more for a bat
before I leave to nap
so that you may not forget
the poems of my own
I write this up for respect
to you my greatest fan
hoping you would like it
and that it will not fall far
from the outer fence
maybe if Im lucky
you might hit us a home
for this is up to bat
and maybe if where lucky
it wont be long till are next chat

[Demondragon]

Very ingenious, blackheart. :D Your poetry just grabs my attention.

[blackheart3]

thank you Im back now just left becous No one was posting anything

[Demondragon]

Well i'm going to log off soon, so you won't be hearing from me for a while....Keep working on your poems.

[blackheart3]

though you may be going with the changing tiad
oneday not far you may come back to where you now reside
and hear of the great works wich have bean wrotten in your mist
and wach as the messangers of the sea
carry words of you return from across both the seas

[Demondragon]

though you may be going with the changing tiad
oneday not far you may come back to where you now reside
and hear of the great works wich have bean wrotten in your mist
and wach as the messangers of the sea
carry words of you return from across both the seas

Most impressive, blackheart....Keep at it. Later.

[blackheart3]

ok bye demon...
By the way I didnt know wether to anser with another poem or just by saying what I said there just coming out really well right now.

[blackheart3]

My freind has just departed
for where I know not of
but know I do that here I lay
waiting for his arival
secounds may go past
but not a minute yet
time does not seam to fly
when waiting for a reson you no not why
till when shall we next meat
old freind of mine
shall it be as we are know freinds on this forum
or shall we be rivels on the hills of old
withen the old castle by the sun
but till another freind comes along
I sit reciting verses of this ryme
wandering what be the time
for time has no steady beat
to move to with your feat
and sit king opun a gilded empeir
knowing not what shall be to come
but hope has it withen my heart
that this silence will not forlast
and till' the end may us dragons stand
as one for what is agreed good

[blackheart3]

I cry runs through the misty are
a chill runs down my spine
has there bean a crime
then another screach runs through the air
making me shake in overwelming fear
what has became of the cild
who ran into the misty night
we formed groups of fours
and began to search through the darkened sky
why did this happen now to such a child why
we ran through houses bellow the grey hills
and when we heard another noise
it came from the old hills
but all that stood was a darkened bird
and a box marked good will
an than there came another sound
from the dark birds mouth it came
and we relaxed and walked back
to are old houses with silent steps
and when we opened the old oak door
we where releaved to find
the little child girl of mine
sleeping unaware of time

[blackheart3]

come for time is not ours to waist
we must discouse all there is to be discuosed
for time is running low
and if we do not hurry Im afraid we'll be to slow
pack all your bags and remember your old life
for that is not how life is on the other shore
I know there are things that you do not want to leave behind
but only time will tell wether they shall come or stay behind
know hurry follow me through the night sky
let the moon be your trusty guede
for none else know the way
follow me through the mist
and feal not the cold
for too much is at stake
to put it on the line for such a small take
follow me now past the dark clouds above
and past the castle by the moon
and fly opun the highest fronts until you reach the sun
know fly down to the olden hills in the castle by the sun
and rest here for here we shall prepare
for when the time shall come

[blackheart3]

let the moonlight be guide your way
opun the vast stairway
for no other light may pass
the vast windows of stained glass
and walk opun the marble stairs
with carefull steps and well planed moves
you may reach the room you seek
but if lazy you find youself
short you may be of any chance

[blackheart3]

To the moon of harvest we dance high and proud
opun the tables we move around
proudly keeping are head up high
chanting of the old day of quests
before we left the mighty rule
of the great kingdoms wich once ruled our lands
and of the brave
sitting by the old wise oak
I sit waching time move by
alone in the dark
the festivil still clear in my mind
waching the many squrreals climb
amongst the braches of the old wight oak

[blackheart3]

:( I keep trying to write but I cant without somebody to talk too.

[Demondragon]

Wow, you wrote those at 11 and 12 at night?! My brain would've stopped working by then. Nice work, blackheart!

[blackheart3]

well actualy they where written at around 3 in the morning

[Orealisk]

wow.....i admire your poetry..

[blackheart3]

I know I already said this but its really nice to hear how people feal about my poetry so Ill say it again thank you

[Orealisk]

you really should not say thanks but your welcome because its an honor to be able to read such magnificent selections!

[Demondragon]

well actualy they where written at around 3 in the morning

Oh...sorry. Forgot about the time differences....Well, that makes them even more amazing!

[blackheart3]

I stand in a forest of great old trees
some oak some pine some maple
I standing tall amongst my eldors
roots planted deep withen the ground
and look up at there weavings of branches
as they grow tall and firm
I once stood alone in a forest of my kind
and know I feal my binding walls are broken
and feal my spirit set free from chains
though where I grow has not changed
a presence has set my mind free of trubles of the past
though shadows still fill the are
above my high rased head
they do not bother me
for this happeniss does not easly become dead
I sit and wait for times gate
to dicied what to become of fate
for not now will my tiredness bother me
for once again I have began to be truely happy

[blackheart3]

heres one short but good all the same please tell me what you think.

look at how time changes things
first war then plains then shining seas
and now I have written about great trees
look how from ashes life can come
and happenis from a singal song
a wonder how many strings where strumed
to play such a lovely song
as the one wich we live and die
withen from now till the end of time

[Haku]

Wow!! they're really good. u must like poems alot!

[blackheart3]

I dont really read them much though only write, though I do read other poems one this sight but I mainly write them.

[blackheart3]

hey guese what heres yet another one for the book, oh yes if you like it and want to show that you liked just tell me that you did like and that would be eneugh.

I wach from this cured soul
as all thouse that lie bellow
bring back up their great kingdom
from the ruins that it had become
and wach as unified they push back thouse
who have caused so much to die
can things of such greatness
really be bearthed from such ashes
as thouse that use lied bellow
but then why not
has time not tought us as much

[blackheart3]

ok heres a fun one

come all thouse who have lifted me
come all thouse who helped
come all thouse who stood up for me
to my village on the sea
so I can let you see how life can be
if you wish to now why I welcome you
to my village on the sea
its becous without you
my village will not be

[blackheart3]

heres one starts off a bit negitive but happy at the end:)

I sit here on the shining see
wandering what could be bothering me
waching as the stars move by
nowing not why I stare at the sky
the moon staring down from high in the sky
I sit there not thinking why
just thinking of what goes through my mind
for reson means little somtimes
but still the fealing is little
and the only reson it apears so bright
is becous it contrasts
all the good the has past

[tigeress]

WOW blackheart excellent work! it's amazing i don't know anyotherway to discribe it! i'm speechless!

[Demondragon]

I love all of them, blackheart!...the one about the trees, i really liked that one. I envy you and your amazing writing ability! :D

[blackheart3]

thank you its your replys that keep me going honestly without them Its alot harder to write becouse Im really not as enthusastic.

[tigeress]

k well i'm gonna go and ill more then likly b on sometime tomorow
nite all (i hate the SNOW up here! yuck! and its only fall still not the week b4 winter starts!)
:( i want warm weathr not cold weathr

[Demondragon]

thank you its your replys that keep me going honestly without them Its alot harder to write becouse Im really not as enthusastic.

It's a pleasure to read and comment on your poetry, blackheart!...And i know what you mean. It's the replies that make it worthwhile to keep posting your work, whether it be drawings, stories, or poetry.

[blackheart3]

though I keep thinking about keeping some for myself if I ever do wright a book or somthing I keep finding that I like posting them better and guese what Im just going to let this one be posted too, just wrote it its similer to some of the others but still defrent.

I feal Ive bean set free
anger no more hunts me
and through the night I dream
of what has bean and will come to be
for darkness has no hold of me
becous I have bean set free
I follow such a winding path
and life may still be its own prisen
but I feal not as I once did
restrained by life prisen
I feal things are finaly
where there meant to be
so life can once more be free

[Demondragon]

Write a book, blackheart!...Write a book! Publish your poetry, it's so good...

[blackheart3]

ya the only proublem is I dont think I can publish anything Ive made public like this dont know though might be able to

[Demondragon]

ya the only proublem is I dont think I can publish anything Ive made public like this dont know though might be able to

I do'nt see why you couldn't publish it, just because its on here...but i don't really know. You should try though. I think itd be cool.

[blackheart3]

maybe I might try soon not this week its easter and we have famly members over but I might try soon if I can. Funny thing is Ive bean composing similer works for awile in my head but I never thought they where verry good ((I tend to be strict on myself not anymore though but I use to be)) and now I find out that there good I am happy.

[Demondragon]

You are gifted, and an excellent writer, and will continue to be...as long as you don't doubt your ability.

[blackheart3]

Never doubt your ability, blackheart. You are gifted, and an excellent writer....
thank you and dont worry I dont anymore.

[tigeress]

maybe I might try soon not this week its easter and we have famly members over but I might try soon if I can. Funny thing is Ive bean composing similer works for awile in my head but I never thought they where verry good ((I tend to be strict on myself not anymore though but I use to be)) and now I find out that there good I am happy.
ya blackheart don't b so hard on ur self! when i read ur poems i visulize the word in my mind! it becomes a picture, a movie in a way! keep doing it and don't give ur self a hard time:)

[blackheart3]

Sorry I was gone all day and didnt post ant poems yet and I was so desapointed that it was already 7:00 and I havnt wrotten anything for this thread today I went and made somthing here it is


My wrist achs bellow my moving pen
the night moves one without a end
words keep come out in ink
as secounds pass without a peep
I dare not look up from my desk
fearing the poems sudden end
but every poem must have a end
so that a new poem can began
so how much longer shall I write
before a new candel can cast its light
and through the darkness in the candle light
what things shall come to hunt my night

[Demondragon]

Ah! Very creative, blackheart! A poem about writing a poem....Ingenious!

[blackheart3]

thank you I have bean writing alot laitly about what Ive bean writing and its verry fun:). also thanks for commenting its nice too now people read your work.

[Demondragon]

No problem, blackheart! This is one of the first threads i look at every time i log on...i'm always lookin forward to another one of your poems.

[blackheart3]

hey thanks for your responce I and thanks for being such a good fan I really apreciat it infact eneagh to scry another poems through my tired mind

sitting on a stary night
waching the moon shine so bright
wandering why for another year
I sit hear waching the many stars
though there is too much too count
theres never eneugh stars abuot
running slowly across the cold night sky
but unlike the old night sky
I have changed much over time
and though the sky I wach is still the same
I no longer wach in sarrowfull cries
but in joyfull rymes

[Demondragon]

hey thanks for your responce I and thanks for being such a good fan I really apreciat it infact eneagh to scry another poems through my tired mind

sitting on a stary night
waching the moon shine so bright
wandering why for another year
I sit hear waching the many stars
though there is too much too count
theres never eneugh stars abuot
running slowly across the cold night sky
but unlike the old night sky
I have changed much over time
and though the sky I wach is still the same
I no longer wach in sarrowfull cries
but in joyfull rymes

I like this one too! I should serisouly copy all your poems into a word document and make a collection out of them....Yes. I think i'll do that.

[blackheart3]

hey I have some new the british are coming no not really just wanted to post my next poem I know its four here but at the moment I am not that tired anyways and its a resonable time in astrailia anyways so here it is

I ride opun time's long ride
as life comes and dies
I wach as the many lifes subside
and leave behind nothing that hasnt died
for some like me life seams to be a bright
candel light
though there are thouse who walk the earth
fealing not lifes great verse
who look upon where shadows lie
to find no light to tell them why
but for me life is not this way
and I am gratefull I can see my way
through what darkness that may block my path
and so that my happieness shall forever last

[Demondragon]

Very nice, blackheart...very nice. *two thumbs up*

[blackheart3]

Hey thanks and may the *crosses fingures* best and farest man when. By the way enjoying your trophy or did you dicide it looks too good to let anybody see it? hahaha the poet will school you and than surender! hahaha ha you will always win ((when I feal like it;))).

[Demondragon]

Hey thanks and may the *crosses fingures* best and farest man when. By the way enjoying your trophy or did you dicide it looks too good to let anybody see it? hahaha the poet will school you and than surender! hahaha ha you will always win ((when I feal like it;))).

Lol, youre crazy....And alas! that "wonderful" trophy you gave me...it is, sadly, no more. I "accidently blew it up". So sorry. :D

[blackheart3]

Hey no worries man I think I "accedently blew up" your records for your bank actount anyways so I guese were even.

[Demondragon]

Nice try, but i don't even have a bank account. :D

[drakeo]

thats an interesting perspective and id like to say it is completly true a nice description on how of this is of the life of a dragon to me a dragon is a precious jewl that keeps the world in control while they became extinct the planet became not known as earth but knowk as a world with lies and deception in the sence of a world of utter caos are world was not ment to be trained to withstand mans grasp on the real value of lifes lengh of time but the thought that crossed them first was to see whos more powerfule and that is to destroy them like they did to the dragon culter

[blackheart3]

Oh I though that house with thouse old people in it was your bank you mean it wasnt of well must have bean your granparents or somthing.

[Demondragon]

Oh I though that house with thouse old people in it was your bank you mean it wasnt of well must have bean your granparents or somthing.

Lol, my grandparents are on vacation, so it looks like you screwed up again! :D Lol.

[blackheart3]

thats an interesting perspective and id like to say it is completly true a nice description on how of this is of the life of a dragon to me a dragon is a precious jewl that keeps the world in control while they became extinct the planet became not known as earth but knowk as a world with lies and deception in the sence of a world of utter caos are world was not ment to be trained to withstand mans grasp on the real value of lifes lengh of time but the thought that crossed them first was to see whos more powerfule and that is to destroy them like they did to the dragon culter I will not judge but how would you dicide whats true or not I mean this not in offence but I would like to know who you speak from.

[blackheart3]

Lol, my grandparents are on vacation, so it looks like you screwed up again! :D Lol.
I said or somthing thought it was your ganparents becouse they looked like a donkey arse but I dont now for sure its really hard to tell seams your whole family all lokes the same too me. ((cant insult you at all wish you where zhuge than Id really make you mad but your a good fan its hard too lie and make it sound like your mad))

[Demondragon]

Grr...! That's goin' too far!! Get your arse over at the dueling range right now so i can beat the sh*t out of it! (( ;) ))

[blackheart3]

oh sure right after you get that tail of yours out from between you legs you cute little puppy dog.

[Demondragon]

Who are you callin' a puppy dog!? I've just about had it with you!...

[blackheart3]

oh look the quet little thing is gumming at my ear it reminds me so much of my dog when it was little.

[RedDragon5]

Who are you callin' a puppy dog!? I've just about had it with you!...If I were you I would have said this. "Well, if you had a tail you would be eating it right now."

[Demondragon]

I'm not much for verbal arguments.

[blackheart3]

head be lucky if I had a tail becous when Im done with him he will need all the replacement body parts he can find.

[RedDragon5]

I'm not much for verbal arguments.Yeah, me ether. But if someone insults me all I have to say is that I feel sorry for the censor.

[Demondragon]

Yeah, me ether. But if someone insults me all I have to say is that I feel sorry for the censor.

Lol....I do'nt find much enjoyment in insulting lesser beings....(blackheart)

[RedDragon5]

Lol....I do'nt find much enjoyment in insulting lesser beings....(blackheart)Me ether, but sadly some other people do.

[blackheart3]

nether do I just some people really are so low they need a little kick to stop them from dieing out... (demondragon)

[Demondragon]

...And yet there are those who think theyre so high that they need to be deflated and brought back down to earth....(blackheart)

[blackheart3]

and still there are those people who think there so high they take there superers and mock them by saying there higher than them... (demondragon)

[Demondragon]

It's a good thing that youre not my superior then, isn't it?...Lol.

[blackheart3]

and its good your not any uglyer too isnt it. loL ((ok conversation ends here I dont want it to be too hard to find my poetry))

[Demondragon]

((okay...I was getting tired of that anyway. :D )) So write more poetry already!

[blackheart3]

fine fine heres another one

if darkness is evil that romes the earth
and wight death to come
than what is good and right
but a word that never comes
if our goal in life is to find a path
then when our gole is reached
what path do we really stand
and to what do we ow the shifting sands
of time that might never end
from now till our end of life
what do we comprehend

[Demondragon]

...Man, i'm running out of things to say going to start repeating myself....I really like it though! Into the collection it goes, then.

[blackheart3]

an excuse for posting this uuuhhhhhhhhhhhh it was falling too low on the list

come dragons too my land
away from humans wrath
and do not think of our lost lands
for what would we be to take them back
if it was blind humans gretest sin
then what would it make of us
for through cleared eyes we see
and what we would be if we
would toss them from there inherated land
and who are we to judge thouse of now
becous of thouse who have come to past
for the plesure wich comes with it shall not last
but forever will the sorrow fill our hearts

[blackheart3]

sorry for posting this but my dog ate my cat wich made my teacher so mad she went and ate the left overs and then called out in a cry why wich made the sparrows fly ect...

I sit opun a bloody hill
though no blood did I spill
I still feal in dept to thouse killed
I know not who they were
but they still where one of us
they had not our heritage
but could have earned it all the same
they where not sent here to die
and had no wish to fight
they where killed by thouse
we once called our brothers
becous of there great hate
they brought many inocents
to there dire fate

[tigeress]

wow now that was quite interesting to read!
i saw the fourth harry potter movie last night

[Demondragon]

Another good poem, blackheart...As always. :D

[blackheart3]

here it is Im so sorry it took so long its really late here and I got cought by my dad and had to sneak right bakc out of my room to cuntenue this nicetalk by the way during school poetry just kept going through my head and for some resons I keep talking during somepoint in the poem about the swaying wight out tree I was reminded of that fact when I reread this one and relized it in this one too.

I sit on a moonlit hill
waching as all sits still
unmoving too the black night
as I gaze opun the stary night
lit by the moon in gloomy haze
to when will lights rise to meet the day
maybe no one will care to say
but I know this land of night
for forever it hunts the day
from her to where the wight oak sways

[Demondragon]

wow, that's really good blackheart! (took you long enough ;) ) You even made it rhyme a bit, too....Nice work.

[blackheart3]

thank you ((I had too get a drink and my dad was sleeping on the couch right next too the fredge so I snuck down fittled around picking out what I want and made tons of noise and he still slept then I set a cup down it made a small noise waking him up then I got sent to my room where I had to wait for him too leave))

[Demondragon]

((lol, that's kind of funny, but i guess it wasn't for you...))

[blackheart3]

((ya it was for me too but I said I had a soar throat that woak me up and I needed to get a drink to help me fall back too sleep I even added a bit of a roughness to my voice to make it sound realistic))

[Demondragon]

((did he believe you?)) --hey, do you like RPs?--

[blackheart3]

((did he believe you?)) --do you like RPs?--
I like dueling arena as you can tell ((got proubely over 100 posts in there)) but dont exactly like the other full flegded RPs much why ((oh and he beleaved me eneugh to get me out of trouble Im verry good with voices))

[Demondragon]

I like dueling arena as you can tell ((got proubely over 100 posts in there)) but dont exactly like the other full flegded RPs much why ((oh and he beleaved me eneugh to get me out of trouble Im verry good with voices))

I was just wondering if you wanted to join the great journey thread it's really interesting ((lol, thats good))

[blackheart3]

((Lets stop talking I want people to be able to at least find my poetry))

[Demondragon]

((oh okay, sorry to get off topic--again!...))

Maybe you should post another poem.

[blackheart3]

ok when I feal like it like after we talk a bit in duel I write another also I forgot to number the last so I need to fix that*

[blackheart3]

here is another

Over oceans I fly
through this blazing fire you call a sky
I glide across the great deserts you call lakes
I fly far as my wings spread wide
through the night sky I glide
so that I may lie against the wight oak of the night
and sing myself a dream to carry me through
the starbound lake we call the night

[Demondragon]

I like this one too! Nice imagery....Come to think of it, i don't think there is one of your poems i didn't like....

Theyre all so good! *round of applause for blackheart*

[tigeress]

very good black! i can't believe i had to stay after school and practice for a play thats being put on next week. its called moonwreckers (the drama teacher mad up the name) i really dont like her she can be a reall ***** some times

[blackheart3]

once not but a day ago
my eyes where darkened by past
remembering at last if not for a day
my past but it did not happy me
for life can be somtime quite mean
but though it is not but a day ago
that I lay here blinded by pasts dark viel
I no longer care for the past
becous now is where my happienes lasts
I may have had a rough past
but nothing can foreever last
unless you let it sit and rest
the darkness will not last
for some things in life are gentel
like the coming spring
and have no will to be mean
when evil spreds its wings
to fly amounge us like buzzing bees
do not fear for evil has no streagth
bessides that you give it with your fear
for evil is no person place or thing
but what you make it with your mind
and it holds not against space or time
for it exists but only withen your mind
but for me this has pasted
for happiness has loyaly come at last
marching down the moonlit streats
bringing joy to all it meats
joy shall forever fly
through the starynight sky
but though joy flys through the sky
some fail to look up at the stary night
and there eyes are always peeled to the solid earth
and fail to enjoy the great burst
of joy and happieness throughout the land
where some still walk forever condemned
to walk this lonesome earth
but somtimes it is there past
there same past that drives me
through the dark gates to join them
in there long march against over sand
but I have bean as I said
removed from there ranks to serve once more
the people who need help more

[Demondragon]

Wow...blackheart...That is amazing....My favorite part:

"do not fear for evil has no streagth
bessides that you give it with your fear
for evil is no person place or thing
but what you make it with your mind"

I envy you and your extraordinary talent. :D

[blackheart3]

thank you... I do feal as if thats a few new poems put into one though you could make alot of poems with all the ways to split it...

[blackheart3]

though I do now wish to say
such binding words that lay
on such a poem on such a day
I fear only time can keep my from the day
when alast I shall say
such words aload for all to here
that are here when that day nears
for with all the days this poem lays
none shall go without some prase
for every day of life can be great
till you come to deaths solem gate
but may you not veiw it as sad fate
for from death came you
but do not run in saddened times
to his gate where no one shall await
for even if your life isnt that great
do not cheat on deaths great gift
for without death you would not have lived

[Demondragon]

Good, very good....As always! :D

[blackheart3]

forever I may wait
tell I enter the golden gate
but never will I let fate dicide
that unhappiness shall ricide
inside my head where I write
of these poems under candle light
though flames burn and have there toal
what toal shall the futere not hold to learn
to hear to know what is fortolled
is nothing but to see a path
out of wich you could walk
for the futer is not set in stone
for one to read and act out alone
but yet a blank slate to be written opun
by thouse who do not simply leave it to fate
to hold there spot on the other side of the golden gate

[blackheart3]

may light guide thouse who travel through the dark
for few know where things start
and where the day shall end
but to deaths gate shall pass a soul
so another one can come forth
for from life comes death
and death comes life
for shadows are not there
without a light to cast opun there owners
for without a light to be sean
what is truely dark but a non exesting tring

[blackheart3]

death walks opun a timless rode
taking thouse from there peacefull homes
brining them through his dark gate
so others may intime come to meet the same fate
but for now they leave so that we can live
another day and shed another tear
for how much time has death brong us this year
from thouse who died in sorrow and cheer
how many teats have ben shed
for thouse who died so that we can lay here in our beds

[Zoranu]

Quite good.

[blackheart3]

thank you zoranu

[Dragon spirit]

Really good black!
Keep going!

[Demondragon]

All of them are superb.

[RedDragon5]

You can say that again.

[Draconis Infernvs]

All of them are superb.

I quote you

[blackheart3]

thank you all... and thank you drift for commenting too you dont usaly reply just read...

[Draconis Infernvs]

sometimes I dont know what to say.

[RedDragon5]

sometimes I dont know what to say.Yeah, me too.

[blackheart3]

well thanks again...

once opun a bright old moon
where no one stood and knew
where no one could even see
how free the moonlit night can be
and too whos hopes shall I walk free
from this scarred shell called a body
and who shall time next bring to dust
shall he who dies be filled with lust
or will it be a tiny kid
knowing not what will come too him
waching in wander the sky above
as clouds turn into dust
whos life is not filled greed lust and hate
but do not leave it to cruel fate
for few shall walk your path
and few shall sind this soung

[Demondragon]

....I'm running out of things to say....It's really good, as always, though. Can't wait for the next installment.

[blackheart3]

ok Ill proubely write somthing laiter today

[Demondragon]

Okay. I'll be waiting!...:D

[blackheart3]

ok heres a quicky hope you like it... not that I think you wont


when first comes to last
and last too more
never be luaghter
and never be morn
for nothing shall last forever
and never more than a word
shall time come when never is no more
may not be known behind any door
and maybe not even deaths old door
will hold the secret of when never is no more
for time has passed and time shall be
a loop through times enfinity
but too whos advantage does this stand
for darkness groes stronger with every end
but at least before a new begans
we will be free if not just too the beggening of the end
but nothing more as nothing speaks
will hide when death looks down too seek
for there is one place death cant see
and that is behind where it stands and brings
others through the dark gate
but death looks like a gift from down there
for though forever they shall stand
forever they will live as not but sand
burning bellow the raised sun
without anything too be sung

[blackheart3]

darkness has covered the vast night sky
to do what I wish I knew why
but no matter how manny of us there is
the anser still remains a shadow in the mist
moving amoungst the living and dead
not showing itself not even its head
what its face looks like I wish not to find out
but who says darkness is a ugly thing
darkness could be a red roise
its pedals its thorns and its stem unknown
but darkness is not a ugly thing
just a lack of light to show its way
darkness is not but confusion and fear
in truth no one in life is right
for none see the world in true light
they see it through influence of the past
and even thouse who are neawly born
lack sight to see and hearing to hear
not even the purest eyes can see
how the wrold really is and can be

[Haku]

u bored black?

[blackheart3]

ok Im a little desapointed with the lack of responce I got from demondragon becouse hes bean on alot but dosnt seam too have viewed my new ones but none the less about a minute ago I dicided to write yet another poem and another poem has come opun myself...here is it

I sit bellow the swaying trees
watching as many leaves
come drifting down from the high trees
thinking of all I see
wandering what it would be like to be
one of thouse high old trees
lissoning too the wind sing
as it waches over everything
and maybe some have never seen
of what the wind now sings
waching as steam rises from natures springs
knowing not a thing

[blackheart3]

heres a short one


may fire be tamed by the suttle wind
shall times once more come to an end
so that it may once again began
anew may it rise from its own ash
flame covered it shall rise
and then start its short dicline
so it may once more began its climb
to the highest point in the stary sky
though fires furry lies withen
its still moved by the suttle wind

[blackheart3]

a really really short one

time before and time agan
never will poems truely end
through the dark night they ride
going to worlds on eather side
too all thouse who this meets there eyes
remember though this poem sudenly ends
the ride really has just began

[Haku]

hey it reminds me of the one u sent me! very good!

[blackheart3]

thank you...now wheres demondragon Ill see whats keeping him when we next meet...

[Demondragon]

heres a short one


may fire be tamed by the suttle wind
shall times once more come to an end
so that it may once again began
anew may it rise from its own ash
flame covered it shall rise
and then start its short dicline
so it may once more began its climb
to the highest point in the stary sky
though fires furry lies withen
its still moved by the suttle wind

this one is myy favorite one of the new poems you wrote....Sorry, blackheart!...for not commenting....Theyre really good!...

[blackheart3]

this one is myy favorite one of the new poems you wrote....Sorry, blackheart!...for not commenting....Theyre really good!...

no prob. just was hoping for a responce sooner or laiter... well anyways this isn't as good as your favret one of mine... not nearly as good but its fine so Ill post it anyway... and anyways its got somthing else...would write a poem but if I wrot a poem too explain everything I said Id be writing for a LONG time...lol...

flowing like a stream
through the air as if nothing
words coming out it such strings
no money can pay for such a syphony
youd think somthing so cold cannot see
the happiness that fills lifes sea
the candel is more brighter than it could ever be
above where you can see

[Demondragon]

Outstanding, blackheart....Simply outstanding.

[blackheart3]

I look down from my high raised bed
watching the forest hoping little is dead
pain coming from my blood covered chest
hoping too get a little rest
but not even thouse lieing below my thrown
will leave thouse I care about alone
though they must eat I still must bleed
too keep thouse I care about from dieing bellow my feet
for its eather death for them or pain for me
so I must leave from my resting state
to fight another battle on this rocky slate

[blackheart3]

Once opun a sunset
we sat there us two
some sky still blue
opun the cold icy bed
as orange faded red
the ice waterfall began
to glitter at the suns desent
and the ice was filled with colors
too many too be said
and as the sun faded bellow the icy bed
its color faded red
but even after the suns desent
the sky still lit with red
and though the day has come too end
the night has just began

[blackheart3]

maybe from ashes somthing besides death may be born
for from death all that has risen was more too morn
I watch as thouse rot away from bellow the golden gates
the sun behind my back forming a crown over my solum head
and the lions soft roar rising above the red tinted floor
who would let so many die too sacure just a few lives
who would leave so many behind too make sure a few do not die
what happened too the honer that once had stand
where wars where faught by leaders instead of just there men
though I sit opun my thrown I still draw my sword at wars first tone
and now my sword tinged with blood sits bellow my thrown left too all others unknown
as the sun sets behind the golden thrown shadowing the land once known

[Demondragon]

Sorry i haven't been on for a while, so i have an excuse for not responding!...
Wow....your poems just keep getting better, blackheart.

[RedDragon5]

Sorry i haven't been on for a while, so i have an excuse for not responding!...
Wow....your poems just keep getting better, blackheart.Yep, demon is right.:)

[blackheart3]

heres one... does not mean much to me but it seams like it should be posted for thouse it does mean somthing to to read

I sit amongst a thousand flowers
a thousand roses not like me
wandering what it would be
like too have family
though pretty are there peddles
sharp are there green stems
like most things its pretty as it begins
but sharp is its end leaving scars
only time can mend
but it does not leave simply just one wound
but scatters its poor prey all over the dark moon
and lost inside and out
the world it then walks about
walking slowly in doupt

[Demondragon]

Wow...that's deep...but still excellent.

[RedDragon5]

Wow...that's deep...but still excellent.Yes, it is very excellent.

[blackheart3]

ok heres another

I walk across the shadowed earth
under the bright high moon
thinking oh what fun it be
to see the sun once more come noon
I walked bellow the cold hard gates
looking down with hate
thinking oh what fun it be
for light once more too fill the sea
I walked across the wavey lakes
thrusting out besides the cold hard gates
thinking oh what fun it be
for the clouds too move and let us see
the sun above the cloudy sea

[blackheart3]

ok heres another

a white sea lies above the hills once colored green
shining lights back to the sky so all can see
what seson it is and what fun it can be
no longer shadowed is what lies behind the trees
for light shall shine on through the night
showing all what they can be
object once more passed without greed
for what it given is to be given without thought of what you shall recieve

[blackheart3]

and another a bit incomplete but it would take pages and time too write the whole thing down so shortened it to a new poem a bit less good than the origanal one I made but I can bairly remember it at all so ya

may light shine through the night
and none be filled with fright
for as long as some light is in the night
everything shall be alright
if you consider light and dark extreams
than what is it that lies perfectly between
neather light nor dark favers none
what shall come of such a one
in the hot dark cold or light
inside and out not filled with fright
night his sword and day his shield
when in defense he faces west
opun the suns first sight
and east opun its set
and when ready to attack
he runs towards the golden sun
so that his shadow is seen by none
if wise and smart he will not attack opun first dark
for who waits too know his enemys
wile they know not of him
is who shall shurlly win
in darkness and in light
may the envirment serve his side

[blackheart3]

as second goes to second
time grows short
now but a day
but what shall it be I say
and as I sit here thinking of what words
shall I write for her
many words have come up
but I find none are worth heard
and now I sit here writing this
wishing I had more time
nothing to do but hope
the future will be kind

[drakeo]

i was once an aceint demon sworn to secrecy then a torn life began to pull my way i shifted time to time finding my spot in life torture was a way.. and life was just a amaginary friend i was thrown from place to place and always shuved into my enamys face i was demanded to torture the one i luved and told that life was a dorment soul posesed by angry thoughts and not to be lived with happyness. a rose of death was seen upon my bloody friend who lays behond my reach he to was torn from my seige i too know now that im to be what i am and what i am is a feriocity of a demand upon the lords of evil i am to perish upon my sins for i have choosen my path and i will not take the right and rongs of evil i will chose what upon i choose of and will distroye those who try to hert the ones i luv that is when i sahll trully lose my self but at the moment my life is upon my dear hands who are not bloody no more as my friend walks through the field of souls not of pure evil but of truely greatness do not take this unlikely for you to are to essend to such a place as the heart and soul to such dragons as we.

what do you think its kinda rough ill fix it up though..

[blackheart3]

its ok though you could make your own thread not yelling at you just thought Id tell you for laiter...

[drakeo]

im sorry what did i do rong ? i didnt mean to effend if thats what i did and i wont bring it up again in that case promise... ill just put it in my profile sum time from know but i dont see whats the problem i thought were able to speak are mind.. and were able to do so without criticism.. guess not then i guess o well...

[blackheart3]

im sorry what did i do rong ? i didnt mean to effend if thats what i did and i wont bring it up again in that case promise... ill just put it in my profile sum time from know but i dont see whats the problem i thought were able to speak are mind.. and were able to do so without criticism.. guess not then i guess o well...
I said it was good I just ask that you share your poetry in a sepret thread next time thought its fine if you post it here its incoveniant for me and the other members. I am not mad or offended just telling you next time can you please make your own thread unless it has to do with my thread. Thank you.

[blackheart3]

but who shall fly so low
as the montanouse forest that lie bellow
who stups so low to the ground
in greed to see what allys can be found
to use than dump out in the trash
as if they where a rat
but even if treated like a king
like a moving swing
even though they go so high
even if it seams they reach the sky
the ground will still come back to meet
there feet
nomader how high
such people fly

[Stranger In Black]

Black,
You know I love to hear/read your poetry...you never cease to amaze me with your words, and your thought. However.. you can't spell.. lol, always a good challenge trying to read your works. But none-the-less You are an amazing poet. And as I told you before.. heh, after the first 10, it seems you repeat a lot of the same ideas. Don't get me wrong, it doesn't bother me. But the last of it happens to be my favorite. I hope you never run out of this brilliance. May it last through your life time, and may it live on after you.

[blackheart3]

Im happy and this has nothing to do with me but what ever wrote it at this moment so Ill post it to... or I could just exit my web browser but that be a waist of a poem so here

I walk along a path not as shadowed as it seams
but as thouse try too help I turn around and flie
I look down opun myself unable too see
what I have and how great things can be
as I begin to feal better I turn and see
how great they all seam standing next to me
I am usless to them so it seams
as I come to help they slow down for me
they try to help and confort me
but who am I but another flee
without wings too fly
without power to ask why
as across the stary sky they fly
not knowing which one of them will next lie
in darkness left too die

[Chakahlah]

driftinglonedragon- thank you, and yes it is true, and Im sorry I cant give you better quility work the proublem seams to be when I try to put the poem down on paper most of the ones I have made the really good ons I cant seam to translate onto the paper it makes me feal like creating my own luanguege to use instead of this one.

If that's the way it makes you feel, follow it. It is a great gift you have there and it is best if you use it. Even if you don't post it here, still write it down. Once you've gotten used to it, and are comfortable with it, u can put it up if you want to.

[Stranger In Black]

hmmm.. I wished you'd sign on and post a new poem. I really do like to hear.. well read* them.

[blackheart3]

ya sorry had alot of proublems with the internet have been unable to come online much laitly

The shadowed lake

far past my golden gates
beneath the forsaken hill that waits
lies a shadowed lake
once happy the lake now crys
spilling water down from its glazed eyes
once blue like the sun filled sky
now faided gray with despise
forever does run this shadowed lake
through deaths dark gate
were salvagers await
to take your soul away
as dead bodys flow through
the black gate
from the shadowed lake

[Stranger In Black]

That's a keeper. I like it!

[blackheart3]

its not done just had to get off computer before finished

[blackheart3]

ok finished

[Dragon spirit]

Very Very good black!
nods*
I like it....

[blackheart3]

good... glad to see you like it

[blackheart3]

shadowed goes the day to night
black figures causing all sorts of fright
as the mist falls low in the moonlit night
masked figures moving out of sight
screems from somewhere untuched by light
rings through the stary night
and deaths bells chime
there dark dark ryme
through space without time
and the ravens song
lasts not long
for death is now where he belongs

[Rez3]

Wow! Dark, very dark, I like it! That's great! :D

[Rez3]

Very good imagery!

[Dragon spirit]

I agree;) Very good!
I like dark poems too......

[blackheart3]

Thank you spirit and rez3. By the way spirit you did not see demondragon on laitly because I have not seen him on and he has not replied in awile.

[Dragon spirit]

No i have'nt......don't know where he is either....

[Rez3]

Neither do I. He hasn't posted at all recently... Wonder why???

[Stranger In Black]

In regard to you last poem,

Very Dark.

Very Good.

[Draconis Infernvs]

Um, isnt Demon a girl?

[RedDragon5]

Um, isnt Demon a girl?I thought that too but no, he's not a girl.

[Draconis Infernvs]

what?! really? omg, Im confused, I really thought he was...I remember seeing it written down..or not, interesting, that kinda changes a few things then

[RedDragon5]

what?! really? omg, Im confused, I really thought he was...I remember seeing it written down..or not, interesting, that kinda changes a few things thenLol, don't worry about it drift. I made the same mistake.

[Demondragon]

Lol...Red, Drift. Seriously, I've had worse happen....It's not a big deal.

And in response to blackhearts most recent poems: The darkness is good! I like it, so keep writing!....

[Draconis Infernvs]

ok, Im straightened out now...and yes I agree with what you say about Blacks poems

[blackheart3]

Heres another.

I sit a top the darkened hill
blood spilled across the bay
not even the yungest will forever stay
days so long yet life so short
like a peddle on the wind
what can stay in the light
when its movements will not end
until the day the wind slows down
and drops you to the ground
when light and darkness means no more
and you rot on the cold ground
and you sit there on the left
bellow deaths gold crown

[Dragon spirit]

Yeah.........another great and dark poem......
nods*
Well done black!

[Demondragon]

Amazing, blackheart....No matter how many poems you write, they are always different and unique.....

[Stranger In Black]

I like your style.



A lot.

[blackheart3]

Heres a random poem I wrote just now

Oh what would the day walkers say
if they came across some one like me on there way
though they walk through the days light
its is darkness that gives them there might
they call me dark they call me evil
but it is they who cant see the light
the daywalkers of the night

[RedDragon5]

Heres a random poem I wrote just now

Oh what would the day walkers say
if they came across some one like me on there way
though they walk through the days light
its is darkness that gives them there might
they call me dark they call me evil
but it is they who cant see the light
the daywalkers of the nightAnother very good poem black.:)

[Stranger In Black]

I absolutely love it. It is my favorite by far. What can I say? It's wonderful. I'm speachless.

[RedDragon5]

Hey, stranger, did you see the poem I wrote? (I forgot if you did or not.:o ) Everyone seems to like it a lot.

[Stranger In Black]

Hey, stranger, did you see the poem I wrote? (I forgot if you did or not.:o ) Everyone seems to like it a lot.

Sorry no.. I haven't spent much time looking around latey.... I'll try and find it

[RedDragon5]

That's alright, I just wondered if you had seen it or not.

[Stranger In Black]

"The one I love"? Is that it?

[RedDragon5]

Yeah, that's it.

[Stranger In Black]

Black, I've been meaning to ask you... do you have anything in particular inspires or drives you to write your series of poems? I know sometimes it's hard to tell. Like I know that something inspired me at one point, then I forget. So.. yeah. Anything you can think of?

[blackheart3]

Its the poetry itself the drives me. Poetry is a gift and I post it here to give that gift to all that care to read.

[blackheart3]

Heres another... defrent but good all the same

"Who are you stranger standing alone,
Who are you stranger bellow no thrown?"
cried the old lady once silent now bold
"I am but a stranger, sadened and cold,
now take my hand and what a sight we will behold"
"No!" cried the old lady, "This is a trick."
"What trick is this? All that lies beyond is the abiss."
"Take my hand and you will be welcomed to my kingdom,
where the flowers bloom both winter and spring
youll be queen wile I king."
"I still fear you all the same, and refuse to play your little games."
"Why fear me kind lady for Im but a stranger, but dust on the wind.
There is nothing to lose and so much to win."
"Verry well I will take your hand." the old lady said
finaly the old lady took his hand
and there she layed silent and dead
head facing the window sill
so silent so still

[tigeress]

excellent black!

[Demondragon]

Um....WOW....No words can possibly describe how great that poem is, blackheart.

[blackheart3]

thank you the style is not my usual but it turned out well all the same

[RedDragon5]

Um....WOW....No words can possibly describe how great that poem is, blackheart.I agree with demon, that is an amazing poem black.

[blackheart3]

Heres one. Though you proubelly like the last one alot better this ones a brighter one for a change.

I sit in my wooden chair
no an idea to share
wishing I could be in bed
then a thought came to my head
I took some paper and wrote to it said
all that needed to be read
and now I share it with my friends
writing now and again
poems which in truth have no end