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Draconis Infernvs
10-25-2005, 09:48 PM
From the tingling of my spine
comes this thought of mine
it sits there day after day
never wanting to go away.
In the day it taunts me, confuses me,
for to be free of it would be to seek death.
Not many understand it because they are not so indepth.
Tis the knowledge of the past mingled with the future,
what will it become but the deamon creature.
It is the thought in the back of all our minds,
coming from our spine.
It sits there day after day
never wanting to go away.
DragonSeeker
10-25-2005, 09:49 PM
you know, you never told us what it is ;):)
Draconis Infernvs
10-25-2005, 09:56 PM
this isnt the same thought silly...
how about this one..
Once did I see a fighter
she was bold with the spirit of a tiger
the movements fast
the movements percise
no matter what, they ended with ****e
at that point I could feel the sweat pooring down my head
and thought why am I in bed?
it was a dream
for the fighter was inside ready to scream
soon it will be set free
I pitty the soul who fights me
DragonSeeker
10-25-2005, 09:57 PM
well you can write...which i cant do ;) i am but a musician.
Draconis Infernvs
10-25-2005, 10:00 PM
I can do many thngs....;)
ok I just saw ***** this, it wasnt a bad word, it was ****e.... lets see if that worked
grrrr ok what I put is that which you put on something to make it have a extra taste in it... trying to describe the word which I cant say eventhough its perfectly fine....
DragonSeeker
10-25-2005, 10:05 PM
put a period between the letters. and like i said....all that i really am is a musician. thats about the extent of my abilities...:(
Draconis Infernvs
10-25-2005, 10:05 PM
A time when I was falling
you caught me
I looked up at you
you seemed free,
then I looked again
and you were gone.
For where are you
where were you all along?
These days pass now as if there was no life,
return to me my love
for I shall be your wife.
Without your hold I would have drowned
you saved me from when I went abound.
Nevermore shall I love another,
for you are my only other.
DragonSeeker
10-25-2005, 10:06 PM
its very nice drift. beautiful.
Beautiful poems, Drift! they were amazing. You really do have a talent for poetry!
RedDragon5
10-26-2005, 08:50 AM
Those are very nice drift, but what happend to some of the words they are only *****?
Draconis Infernvs
10-26-2005, 09:02 AM
aparently they think its a bad word or something thats why its like***** but its not.... and I cant tell you what the word is because it will just do**** that... quit annoying actualy..
yeah, ive had that problem. they thought 'G O O K' in gobble-dee-g o o k was a bad word! (had to put spaces between the letters otherwise it would read gobble-dee-****)
Draconis Infernvs
10-26-2005, 11:43 AM
oh... cool thanks for sharing that.... I'll fix it then
Dragon spirit
10-26-2005, 12:21 PM
Poems that creates a tear......
Demondragon
10-26-2005, 12:35 PM
Your poetry is very nice, drift. :)
Pyro-Dragon
10-26-2005, 03:32 PM
Yes, you are quite talented, does it come naturally?
Draconis Infernvs
10-26-2005, 03:45 PM
thank you all.... if i sit and think about it, sometimes it just comes...
Pyro-Dragon
10-26-2005, 03:46 PM
Wow, I'm green with envy. :D
Chakahlah
10-27-2005, 07:29 AM
You are very multi-talented DriftingLoneDragon!
Draconis Infernvs
10-31-2005, 11:00 AM
this ones interesting..... its on another post I started..
once I was a dragon soaring high around
then I awoke and found I was human.
But what am I in truth?
A human who dreams she is a dragon,
or a dragon who dreams she is a human?
Demondragon
10-31-2005, 12:12 PM
Oh, that's a good one. :) It makes you think....Very interesting.
RedDragon5
10-31-2005, 12:47 PM
this ones interesting..... its on another post I started..
once I was a dragon soaring high around
then I awoke and found I was human.
But what am I in truth?
A human who dreams she is a dragon,
or a dragon who dreams she is a human?
Very good drift, very good!
Chakahlah
11-06-2005, 07:16 PM
I really liked that one
Draconis Infernvs
11-27-2005, 07:13 PM
a dream of mine I had last night
really made me start with a fright.
I saw my friend drown in a lake,
this made me start to shake.
then I thought "why should I fear?"
no evil is worse than whats in front of you,
behold in my eyes the evil that will come for you...
DragonSeeker
11-27-2005, 07:17 PM
Drift...who was it?? *gulps* Was it...me??
Draconis Infernvs
11-28-2005, 03:45 PM
oh come on...I did this one a few years ago, just remembered it...its one of my friends here..
DragonSeeker
11-30-2005, 09:49 PM
Hmm..that's not a comforting thought...I'd hate to see anyone on here die.
Draconis Infernvs
11-30-2005, 09:56 PM
hush little baby dont you cry everythings gonna be alright....
he is here to hold through the night....
until he gets mad and wants to fight...
He will hit you and hurt you, even tear your soul apart,
but once he sees you lying on the ground he will put a gun to his head and make a plead..
"baby Im sorry for hurting you, I know Ive done it too many times before and now I see you dead....I put this gun to my chin and pull the trigger to my grin..."
you wake to the emptyness of life
and see him, you pull out a nife..
but he doesnt move...he is dead..
for once forgiveness is in my head,....
*nemh not that good just something......*
blackheart3
11-30-2005, 10:00 PM
ya its ok the wording at least wait one secound [takes deap breath] ok good ya the wording is ok...
DragonSeeker
11-30-2005, 10:04 PM
That's pretty good...A little unsettling but good.
Draconis Infernvs
11-30-2005, 10:14 PM
do not fear for the angel of death is near....grrr I hate her sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
blackheart3
11-30-2005, 10:15 PM
yes we know drift ((your growling again;)))
DragonSeeker
11-30-2005, 10:15 PM
*says nothing*
Draconis Infernvs
11-30-2005, 10:17 PM
something wrong with my growling?..... IF i were not the person or dragon I am she would be sleeping with the worms right now....5 feet under...
blackheart3
11-30-2005, 10:19 PM
no justs has to go with what I said earler in the romantic thread remember drift.
Draconis Infernvs
11-30-2005, 10:21 PM
yep..... let me think of other poem thingys....
Draconis Infernvs
12-10-2005, 08:34 PM
The seperation
he sits on his throne, the dark lord, wanting to be alone.
his army assembled for battle,
his journey begins, the earth rattles.
it is not just power he seeks
but the long lost one to whom he soon meets.
They ride out on the moonlite night,
killing all the rebel humans in sight.
To the ends of the earth he flys,
until day break all night he rides.
To the city of Anunki where she lay,
asleep in her bed until the break of day.
But no there she is!
standing in the shadow of his.
Prancing by her on his horse of black,
he stares and she stares back.
One thousand lifes he has waited,
many lifes he has gone through, tainted.
Now he has found her,
he could be no prouder.
Yet something happens, he is being pulled away,
she reaches for him and yells "stay!!!"
what is happening he thinks,
he reaches back as his heart sinks.
he shakes his head, realising he is still in bed.
It was a dream,
his soul is ready to scream.
one day it will be true,
till that day I will never stop searching for you...
blackheart3
12-10-2005, 10:17 PM
good one drift... intresting too...
*looks around* SO many poets, writers and drawers in this web!:D I luv u guys! *looks at drifts poem* absolutly marvolus!
DragonSeeker
12-11-2005, 07:32 PM
Very good Drift...Very good.
kit2.0
12-11-2005, 08:39 PM
drift, the ability to take your mind heart and soal, and put them into words is a gift and should be used wisely ... I think your poetry is beautiful!
Draconis Infernvs
12-11-2005, 08:44 PM
why thank you so much Kit! I will remember your words...and thank you everyone else, truly...
Draconis Infernvs
12-11-2005, 09:55 PM
If all my friends were to jump off a bridge, I wouldn't jump with them, I'd be at the bottom to catch them.
DragonSeeker
12-11-2005, 09:55 PM
*laughs* So true. You would be. And you have already done that. You did that for me. *smiles* Thank you.
Draconis Infernvs
12-11-2005, 09:57 PM
*smiles back* you are very welcome..I will always be there to catch those who fall..
DragonSeeker
12-11-2005, 09:59 PM
Even if I am not nearly as tall or strong as you are...I will stand with you. I will try my best to hellp.
blackheart3
12-11-2005, 09:59 PM
and Im just going to keep my big mouth shut for now...
Draconis Infernvs
12-11-2005, 10:03 PM
you always have to say that black...always welcomed those who wish to help
blackheart3
12-11-2005, 10:05 PM
no its not that I just had a "smart" remark that I didnt want too say out of respect for you my freinds...
Draconis Infernvs
12-11-2005, 10:07 PM
well thank you for not saying it then, friend.
DragonSeeker
12-11-2005, 10:10 PM
*grumbles* I get the feeling it was for me wasn't it?
blackheart3
12-11-2005, 10:14 PM
*grumbles* I get the feeling it was for me wasn't it?
no it was for drift...
DragonSeeker
12-11-2005, 10:18 PM
Oh...I'm sorry...*looks down* The past still hurts badly...
Draconis Infernvs
12-11-2005, 10:21 PM
Im sorry seeker...you in good company now..*glares at Black* even if some forget sometimes..
blackheart3
12-11-2005, 10:22 PM
Oh...I'm sorry...*looks down* The past still hurts badly...
I know Im sorry for you I have an idea of how you feal...((remember that;)))
blackheart3
12-11-2005, 10:24 PM
Im sorry seeker...you in good company now..*glares at Black* even if some forget sometimes..
you think I never tried try to help him you think I never spend over an hour if not hours PMing too him too make him feal better becouse of somthing others said...*breaths out* verry well think what you might and Ill know what I do...
Draconis Infernvs
12-11-2005, 10:30 PM
I know that Black, I was defending him because I thought you might have forgot.
blackheart3
12-11-2005, 10:32 PM
I know that Black, I was defending him because I thought you might have forgot.
I forget little drift but forgive much... good luck again drift
Draconis Infernvs
12-11-2005, 10:34 PM
good luck for what?
blackheart3
12-11-2005, 10:36 PM
lol the history and meating your friend...lol right your friend sounds funny from my veiw...
Draconis Infernvs
12-11-2005, 10:48 PM
oh lol:o ...I guess it would sound funny from your p.o.v....
blackheart3
12-11-2005, 10:52 PM
and maybe it might sound weird for any smart person whos bean keeping up to date on the RP's...
Eelukathe
12-18-2005, 03:35 PM
The seperation
he sits on his throne, the dark lord, wanting to be alone.
his army assembled for battle,
his journey begins, the earth rattles.
it is not just power he seeks
but the long lost one to whom he soon meets.
They ride out on the moonlite night,
killing all the rebel humans in sight.
To the ends of the earth he flys,
until day break all night he rides.
To the city of Anunki where she lay,
asleep in her bed until the break of day.
But no there she is!
standing in the shadow of his.
Prancing by her on his horse of black,
he stares and she stares back.
One thousand lifes he has waited,
many lifes he has gone through, tainted.
Now he has found her,
he could be no prouder.
Yet something happens, he is being pulled away,
she reaches for him and yells "stay!!!"
what is happening he thinks,
he reaches back as his heart sinks.
he shakes his head, realising he is still in bed.
It was a dream,
his soul is ready to scream.
one day it will be true,
till that day I will never stop searching for you...
seems familiar(hint,hint)
Draconis Infernvs
12-18-2005, 03:43 PM
*smiles* ya it does, doesnt it..;)
Draconis Infernvs
12-20-2005, 09:02 PM
oh baby when you come back down,
dont forget the love you found in me I know that your gonna take time,
remember Im by your side,
dont worry Im down for you,
dont matter what your gonna do,
I'll be there killing time
waiting on you
what should I do
I'll be siting here waiting killing time...
I'll be staring at the wall..
Eelukathe
12-21-2005, 09:10 AM
wow your really good at poetry. how long did it take you to write that?
Draconis Infernvs
12-21-2005, 10:26 AM
last night when I was on....
Darksilver
12-21-2005, 11:00 AM
You are a great poet, there is no question in my mind. A possible Poet Laureate for the dragons.
Draconis Infernvs
12-24-2005, 08:19 PM
why thank you, you are extremely talented in the art as well.. here is one that I found on another sight, it just spoke to me so I thought I would share it..
The Shield of Unity
? By Clay Bear
From the lowest plains to the highest hill
I've journeyed through life for a love I sought to feel.
My heart and spirit have been the source of my inner light,
to guide my every step with wisdom and insight.
Like that of a mighty eagle flying high above...
so were my hopes in search of my love.
Visions and dreams told me you were there...
a gentle caring spirit so unique and rare.
I heard a whisper as the winds softly blew...
the voice of The Great Spirit that I'd find you.
May the shield of unity bring our fate
so that you may be my eternal soul mate.
Draconis Infernvs
12-25-2005, 10:19 PM
The body of a warrior may decay,
yet the spirit will never delay
Call upon them to defend
they will be there till the end
When they die in battle or in bed
that same spirit remains within the dead
So dont morn our passing for long
we will always be there to keep you strong
And when you feel your at your end
remember the dragon will be your eternal friend.
DragonSeeker
12-25-2005, 10:30 PM
It's good. I can't write poetry to save my life. :)
blackheart3
12-25-2005, 10:31 PM
verry good drift
blackheart3
12-25-2005, 10:32 PM
It's good. I can't write poetry to save my life. :)
yes but thats why you have you celo it sings the poetry for you((thats what you play right))
Draconis Infernvs
12-25-2005, 10:40 PM
thank you...
Am I worthy?
Walking down the stone walkway they watch me
in numbers they are few
in numbers I am one
one foot in front of the other, dont trip, stay the course
in size they tower
in size i shrink
looking up at them I shudder
as many have done before, in triumph and in faliure
I see there gaze
terrible yet wise
beholden within those dark eyes that watch me
lies something ancient, something great
the scares upon there bodies tell of battles past
they still watch me
i feel 5 feet tall, with them 10 feet
oh how that which I am makes me shiver in fear
these old warriors standing still
watching me, judging me, testing me
I stop, at the end of the walk way and turn
my heart skips a beat, they stand their tall and proud, fierce yet gentle, knowing....
there gaze pierces right through my very soul
they know
I feel so small, so helpless against them
what significance do I hold compared to them?
they know
I bow my head
lower my body
spread my wings
"here I stand...Judge, my masters"
DragonSeeker
12-25-2005, 10:40 PM
Yes...That's true...but I do not know how to make up music...I can play it on paper...but it's hard for me to feel it if you get my meaning...
DragonSeeker
12-25-2005, 10:42 PM
Oooohhh...that's a really good one...
blackheart3
12-25-2005, 10:48 PM
Yes...That's true...but I do not know how to make up music...I can play it on paper...but it's hard for me to feel it if you get my meaning...
make your own compose it then write it on paper I have whole conversations and storys somtimes when Im bored on an instrament... panios the easest. If Im sad the music fallows happy it rings with joy triamphit it seams like it never sieses and scared it stops in delay...:) oh and second poems good as always glad too see theres so many poets in this world.
DragonSeeker
12-25-2005, 10:56 PM
I just can't...I can play it...but I really can't feel it...I don't know how to...
Draconis Infernvs
12-25-2005, 10:58 PM
um, dont mean to badger you talking on my thread...but did I hear a cant again?
DragonSeeker
12-25-2005, 10:59 PM
(Mommy...)
*gulps*
Draconis Infernvs
12-25-2005, 11:04 PM
(lol)
heres something that should work..dont think of that word, it helps me, when I think I cant I say I can..
DragonSeeker
12-25-2005, 11:08 PM
My mind doesn't function like that...It just doesn't like to think like that.
blackheart3
12-25-2005, 11:09 PM
My mind doesn't function like that...It just doesn't like to think like that.
how your mind works does not defere from person to person just how you use how it works...
DragonSeeker
12-25-2005, 11:15 PM
I suppose...but...It's just hard for me to feel it...
Eelukathe
12-26-2005, 03:37 PM
thats excellent. don't fear being judged for anyone with a portion of a mind can see you are perfect and could not say no less
Draconis Infernvs
12-26-2005, 07:55 PM
why thank you, you are extremely talented in the art as well.. here is one that I found on another sight, it just spoke to me so I thought I would share it..
The Shield of Unity
? By Clay Bear
From the lowest plains to the highest hill
I've journeyed through life for a love I sought to feel.
My heart and spirit have been the source of my inner light,
to guide my every step with wisdom and insight.
Like that of a mighty eagle flying high above...
so were my hopes in search of my love.
Visions and dreams told me you were there...
a gentle caring spirit so unique and rare.
I heard a whisper as the winds softly blew...
the voice of The Great Spirit that I'd find you.
May the shield of unity bring our fate
so that you may be my eternal soul mate.
just bringing this up a few pages
Draconis Infernvs
12-26-2005, 08:03 PM
The body of a warrior may decay,
yet the spirit will never delay
Call upon them to defend
they will be there till the end
When they die in battle or in bed
that same spirit remains within the dead
So dont morn our passing for long
we will always be there to keep you strong
And when you feel your at your end
remember the dragon will be your eternal friend.
same with this one
Draconis Infernvs
12-26-2005, 08:03 PM
thank you...
Am I worthy?
Walking down the stone walkway they watch me
in numbers they are few
in numbers I am one
one foot in front of the other, dont trip, stay the course
in size they tower
in size i shrink
looking up at them I shudder
as many have done before, in triumph and in faliure
I see there gaze
terrible yet wise
beholden within those dark eyes that watch me
lies something ancient, something great
the scares upon there bodies tell of battles past
they still watch me
i feel 5 feet tall, with them 10 feet
oh how that which I am makes me shiver in fear
these old warriors standing still
watching me, judging me, testing me
I stop, at the end of the walk way and turn
my heart skips a beat, they stand their tall and proud, fierce yet gentle, knowing....
there gaze pierces right through my very soul
they know
I feel so small, so helpless against them
what significance do I hold compared to them?
they know
I bow my head
lower my body
spread my wings
"Judge, my masters"
and finally this one, just bringing them up a few pages...
Chakahlah
12-29-2005, 03:01 AM
You're poems are just as good as your drawings Drift. They're beautiful.
WOW DRIFT!!!! Absolutely amazing! Wish I could write poems like that. But I like drawing and have been perfecting my artistry all my life. So I'll stick to that.
DragonSeeker
12-31-2005, 10:12 AM
Heh...I can't even draw...
Keep practising and you'll improve.
DragonSeeker
12-31-2005, 11:03 AM
It's not my area...I'm just not good at it...The thing I'm good at is music...And even in that I'm not that good...
But you are in orchestra last time I heard. You can't be that bad.
DragonSeeker
12-31-2005, 11:06 AM
Well I cannot make music...I can play it but I cannot make it up as I go.
I can barely play music and I definitely can't make music. Drawing and painting are my strengths.
DragonSeeker
12-31-2005, 11:10 AM
*sighs* I'm never happy am I?? I can't just be happy with what I've got...
*smiles* many people are like that. They want more. But happy with your music, keep at it, and maybe you'll be able to write some music of your own.
*But be happy*, not 'but happy'. Whoops.
DragonSeeker
12-31-2005, 11:13 AM
I know but I can't go to college just on music...I need something else...
What are your other strengths??
Or what kind of thing do you want to aim for as a job? That could help decide what you could do at college.
DragonSeeker
12-31-2005, 11:18 AM
I have no idea...I want to go out and look for dragons myself...But my parents won't go with that idea...
No, it doesn't really pay in modern society to do that. Shame. I dunno what I wanna be either...
DragonSeeker
12-31-2005, 11:22 AM
*smirks* Welcome to the world that's run by cash...Sucks doesn't it?
*smirks back* It does suck that this world is so materialistic.
DragonSeeker
12-31-2005, 11:25 AM
Well when it's run by the greed of others...I'm not suprised. It's a miracle that the Earth's still here with all the nukes that are around...
I'm surprised too. But, if we don't stop polluting, then we're all gonna fry in the heat or drown in the floods. It'll be mankind's fault. I just hiope we find asolution or that some higher power will pity us and help...
DragonSeeker
12-31-2005, 11:32 AM
*smiles* Dragons could always help but then there'd be mass hysteria and panic and then interspecies war...All because us humans are scared to death of what we don't know.
I'm surprised that when the Americans saw 'War of the Worlds' that they didn't try to blow up Mars.
And if a human and Dragon war began, I think that humans would lose.
Draconis Infernvs
01-02-2006, 10:03 AM
From the eyes of a dragon I see them come,
suddenly they stop wishing to run.
It is the mistake of man that these eyes see history repeated again and again,
for soon the drought of death will come again.
DragonSeeker
01-02-2006, 10:04 AM
...Mommy...
Wow! Once again, Drift, you amaze me!
Eelukathe
01-03-2006, 11:01 AM
amazing...simply amazing you took the words right out of my mouth
Draconis Infernvs
01-28-2006, 09:23 AM
They bound my wings,
clipped my claws,
chained me to the gate.
If humans ever found out,
this is our fate.
not to bash humans, it just came to me...
Dragon spirit
01-28-2006, 10:23 AM
well........sadly it will be true if they found one.....
but it depends.......
anyway well done drift!
Wow, Drift! You are a great poet! Your verses are always mezmerising!
Draconis Infernvs
01-29-2006, 10:51 AM
thank you..you are so kind...
You are kind as well. And of course, talented.
Draconis Infernvs
01-29-2006, 11:00 AM
you told me to not fear
so I became brave.
you told me not to be weak
so I became strong.
You told me not to love
so I became hollow.
you told me not to feel
so I became hard.
you told me to not see
so I turned away.
you thought you where teaching me how to live
but in truth, you taught me how to die.
Dragon spirit
01-29-2006, 11:00 AM
I agree Rez!:D
wow drift!
I really like this one!
WOW!!! That's a deep, meaningful poem, Drift. Well done.
Eelukathe
01-30-2006, 09:25 AM
wow thats awsome!!! you really have a talent for words
Blackdragon6
02-01-2006, 12:16 PM
That is a work of art drift. Well done. Keep it up!
Demondragon
02-01-2006, 12:34 PM
I agree with all of you....Simply outstanding, drift.
Wow drift a very eefective poem. i read it and got a tingly feeling that throughout my eniter body.
Draconis Infernvs
02-04-2006, 11:36 AM
Im glad it had its effect, thank you all...
Draconis Infernvs
02-21-2006, 10:14 AM
you told me to not fear
so I became brave.
you told me not to be weak
so I became strong.
You told me not to love
so I became hollow.
you told me not to feel
so I became hard.
you told me to not see
so I turned away.
you thought you where teaching me how to live
but in truth, you taught me how to die.
grrr, Im having poets block...
I'm having writer's block with my story. I have written anything for it for ages.
Anyway, I'm sure that when the inspiration hits you, you'll write another masterpiece! You're a really good poet!
Draconis Infernvs
02-24-2006, 10:17 AM
Oh by the crooked hand of fate,
I spoke my last words too late.
Short and sweet. New style of writing for you, isn't it, Drift? Not bad at all...
Demondragon
02-24-2006, 11:32 AM
Hey, i really like that drift! It's only two lines, but it says so much...
Draconis Infernvs
02-24-2006, 11:34 AM
thanks, ya, I like the short and sweet version, gets right to the point
Indeed it does. By the way, I like your new sig!
Draconis Infernvs
02-24-2006, 11:42 AM
thanks! hehe, I found it on a t-shirt on the web
Practical message, and quite funny! That's good!
Draconis Infernvs
03-17-2006, 09:39 AM
My Cousin, my inspiration
All the days of your young life
you endured such pain and helplessness
the eyes where dead
the muscles worn out
yet you staid long enough to teach us
to teach us humanity
to love
to perserver when all things seemed at an end.
Last night I touched your lifeless hands
and felt the strength within your soul
in that moment you showed me that the world is ours
nothing can stop us from becoming what we want.
I shed one tear for you
and know this is for the best
at last you will have peace.
Yet I shed more for your father
my uncle
who in all the years I have known him
was so strong
and last night so weak for you.
No parent should have to outlive their child
May you rest in peace
Austin Wilson 2003-2006 found peace at 8:00a.m. this morning of March the 17
Draconis Infernvs
03-18-2006, 09:12 PM
tourtured soul
Forgive me friend
all i wanted was for you to mend.
you where there when others fled
stayed by my side when all was dead.
i see now what i have done to your heart
i took it, loved it, tore it apart.
that was not my intention at all
now i am cursed to forever fall.
these red wings have torn
on the branches of fates thorns.
these eyes have been blinded
by the wip you guided.
my body is broken and weak
this is not the destiny i seek....
wow............................................... ...
Draconis Infernvs
03-21-2006, 10:19 PM
when it comes to the end
your all i can see
with the claw to mend
you set me free....
meh, ive been bored, so im making these little ones up as i go...this one is when a lover/friend/family member takes the life of another to save them...
Draconis Infernvs
03-23-2006, 10:00 AM
TRIED TO GIVE YOU WARNING BUT EVERYONE IGNORES ME
told you everything loud and clear
BUT NOBODIES LISTENING
called to you so clearly
BUT YOU DONT WANT TO HEAR ME
told you everything loud and clear
but nobodies listening
i got a heart full of pain
head full of stress
hand full of anger
held in my chest
the pain gave me something i could set my sights on.....
Linkinpark, gotta love those guys....i was listening to this song and felt these words
I have that cd ...thats a really good song...
Draconis Infernvs
03-23-2006, 03:20 PM
yes it is....
Fire_Dragon_Queen
03-23-2006, 03:21 PM
Linkin Park is awesome!
Eelukathe
03-23-2006, 04:09 PM
sorry i haven't been on for awhile but it seems in my absence that your writting has flourished. the are both written with great skill and meaning....these works you should be very proud of for none i have read match that which u have written
Draconis Infernvs
03-25-2006, 09:41 AM
thank you Eelu....truly
Back into the darklands all have sent me
to dine with the demons and devils of the mind
the walk was long, i tried to turn back
yet i saw the wips and chains you all held
driving me away, away still
crying couldnt save me, begging couldnt either
the eyes of friends so soon became the eyes of enemies
leaving me for dead.
i became invisible to you all,
yet right in front of you i stood proud and tall
trying to teach you, trying to show you
but in the end what does it matter?
i sit starry eyed staring at my plate
when all around sit the demons of my fate
I start to eat, waiting for the next wave of deciet
Eelukathe
03-26-2006, 11:22 PM
Again amazing artistry but also much falsehood for belive me when i say this i will never betray you and i will always welcome u into my heart, mind, and soul
Draconis Infernvs
03-27-2006, 10:18 AM
it wasnt really directed at anyone on this forum..but those that i know outside of here..
Eelukathe
03-27-2006, 06:28 PM
it wasnt really directed at anyone on this forum..but those that i know outside of here..in a way that is good but also troubling that your friends would do that to you especially since u don't deserve that kind of treatment
Valoren
03-28-2006, 03:48 AM
well such friends are not friends are they?
Draconis Infernvs
03-28-2006, 11:52 AM
ya, one false word, one wrong movement can turn a lifelong friend, into the greatest enemy...
thats not always true drift...
Draconis Infernvs
03-28-2006, 03:34 PM
thats what has happened to me so far.
i say it all depends on the situation, the time and the lie.
thats what has happened to me so far.
probably bad luck
Valoren
03-29-2006, 05:02 PM
A time when I was falling
you caught me
I looked up at you
you seemed free,
then I looked again
and you were gone.
For where are you
where were you all along?
These days pass now as if there was no life,
return to me my love
for I shall be your wife.
Without your hold I would have drowned
you saved me from when I went abound.
Nevermore shall I love another,
for you are my only other.
drift....
that is just...
thank you...
thats just..
well I have priavate words for you
That is an amazing poem!!!
drift....
that is just...
thank you...
thats just..
well I have priavate words for you
why must they be private...that poem was from like the first page...why are you talkin about it now...???
Draconis Infernvs
04-04-2006, 10:12 PM
be careful of the wicked turn of the twist
a flower blooms and dies with the turn of the wrist
Draconis Infernvs
04-05-2006, 08:54 PM
A soul unto itself is nothing, but put with others, it is great.
The moment of my greatness is flickering...
Hell is what you make it.
just some sayings....
Demondragon
04-05-2006, 10:21 PM
Did you write those sayings?
I like them.
Draconis Infernvs
04-05-2006, 10:21 PM
Our Blades come together
face to face
fighting forever
to the ground my blood drops
like a leaky fauset
my heart beat skips
looking down a blade tip seen
through the back it hides
stoping dead center unclean....
to be continued..
Draconis Infernvs
04-05-2006, 10:22 PM
Did you write those sayings?
I like them.
i quarked what my teacher said into how i would say it
Demondragon
04-05-2006, 10:27 PM
Lol. Very clever of you. Sounds fun. :D
Draconis Infernvs
04-05-2006, 11:04 PM
why thank you Demon!
I like your latest poem, Drift!
that last poem was magnificent drift:D
Draconis Infernvs
04-06-2006, 11:07 PM
Our Blades come together
face to face
fighting forever
to the ground my blood drops
like a leaky fauset
my heart beat skips
looking down a blade tip seen
through the back it hides
stoping dead center unclean....
to be continued..
a jerking force brings me to my knees
coughing up blood
the blade once more set free
stance at the ready
unwavering divotion to a deed
two souls locked in mortal kombat
the pain increasing my will to survive
ragged breath
none leave this court alive....
continued...
urg...I wanna know the rest ...lol...sorry Im a bit impatient...:D
Demondragon
04-07-2006, 11:04 AM
I love it!
Post the rest!
Draconis Infernvs
04-07-2006, 11:13 PM
a jerking force brings me to my knees
coughing up blood
the blade once more set free
stance at the ready
unwavering divotion to a deed
two souls locked in mortal kombat
the pain increasing my will to survive
ragged breath
none leave this court alive....
continued...
my weakness in your eyes
upon the ground
is only a disguise
an unbound soul
always ready to toil to die
unleashed in a flow of movement
sword raised, slashing down
an enemy never hesitates
in your own blood you will drown....
i dont know if i like this one...
You may not know if you like it, but I do! Very well written, Drift. You should be proud of all your poetry.
Valoren
04-10-2006, 02:31 AM
mmmm I hunger for battle!
I need to kill something (not jokeing)
well I will go hunting again
I havent made a kill the last few times
but I think my luck will change today
and I love the poem
perhaps I should write some battle poetry?
I have some older stuff on paper which I could
type up and post
I have a case of writers block
so I will have to clear my mind out
hopefully I shall have it up soon
Valoren
04-10-2006, 02:34 AM
You may not know if you like it, but I do! Very well written, Drift. You should be proud of all your poetry.Rez is right I keep even the poems that I do not publish
for each is my record of my thoughts
my poems are my diary in a sence
A record of my heart
Draconis Infernvs
04-10-2006, 02:38 PM
hmm....funny how you hunger for battle when reading my "battle" poetry...that is not the exact meaning of it, but to each his own.
Draconis Infernvs
04-10-2006, 02:47 PM
my weakness in your eye
upon the ground
is only a disguise
an unbound soul
always ready to toil to die
unleashed in a flow of movement
sword raised, slashing down
an enemy never hesitates
in your own blood you will drown....
i dont know if i like this one...
i pierce through your heart
you pierce through mine
now we cannot part
sliding to our knees clutching our blades
starring into each others soul
it has finally come to an end
no more war, no more hate
we were never one
this is the worlds fate....
Very nice Drift. Once again, I praise you.:D
once again it is great....
Draconis Infernvs
04-10-2006, 09:04 PM
thank you all, you are so kind to me.
Demondragon
04-10-2006, 10:36 PM
Nice poem, drift.
Your work is always laudable!
thank you all, you are so kind to me.
You're welcome.:D
Draconis Infernvs
04-17-2006, 02:17 PM
the bond of souls is strong
the bond of enemies is stronger
what we hate we will love
what we love we will hate
deception is the rule of thumb
among mortal enemies
friend once, enemy next
allie for a while
traitor for eternity
this all know yet none act accordingly
...your peoms always give me the chills...lol....very good...
suugakusha
04-17-2006, 02:20 PM
That's too depressive... I don't really like it... I'm a positive thinker.
Ick positive...learn ta live with it this stuff is a natural part of life...no effence:D
suugakusha
04-17-2006, 02:27 PM
Of course, to learn how to handle it...
But this sounds like giving up to me... No offence meant, too.
Draconis Infernvs
04-17-2006, 02:28 PM
chills? really? thats interesting...
depressive? huh, i never looked at it that way, im like in a really good mood, it just poped into my head, maybe the way im looking at it and the way yall percieve the words is really diff. thats usually the case....but seriously i dint intend for it to be depressive, just matter-of-factly....ill write some more positive stuff for ya Suuga, that is if you end up precivening it that way. i think this is very interesting, how i see it and yall do,hmmm...ok sorry im rambling, just got out of Psych. class so im still stuck in Psych mode
suugakusha
04-17-2006, 02:32 PM
Oh, you needn't be considerate to me... After all, it's your poetry and your thoughts, so you don't have to change your style to please me. It's still very good, even if I don't like it.
Draconis Infernvs
04-17-2006, 02:34 PM
lol, your worth being considerate to my friend ,besides it helps me expand how i write, and i dont mind. Oh and just so this fact sticks, i never give up, no matter what the cercimstances...but then theres more behind me than you know, ok, gotta go to work, bye Suuga, and fang
suugakusha
04-17-2006, 02:36 PM
Thank you for that... I admire that attitude...
Draconis Infernvs
04-26-2006, 07:58 PM
you are very welcome suuga...
if i fell between the cracks
falling through darkness
into iternal nothingness
would you follow?
Chakahlah
04-26-2006, 08:32 PM
I love reading your writing, drift. It is a good way to start the morning by reading something writen by someone with as much talent as you have.
Demondragon
04-26-2006, 09:59 PM
I like it...
It asks an interesting question.
Depending on the answer, you would know who your true friends were...
Draconis Infernvs
04-26-2006, 11:03 PM
Thank you so much Chak, you have brightened my day/night! i am so glad to hear such words, i am deeply honored...
and yes Demon, it would show who your real friends were..and perhaps how crazy they are;)
Demondragon
04-26-2006, 11:07 PM
..and perhaps how crazy they are;)
lol
Yeah, and maybe that too. :D
Eelukathe
04-27-2006, 09:14 AM
you are very welcome suuga...
if i fell between the cracks
falling through darkness
into iternal nothingness
would you follow?
yes...without a second thought
you are very welcome suuga...
if i fell between the cracks
falling through darkness
into iternal nothingness
would you follow?
Thats kinda an odd question...I dont know who its askin but I would follow...:)
Draconis Infernvs
04-27-2006, 08:38 PM
Our fates were one
something that could not be undone.
Until that fatefull night
when you, on a whim, took flight.
I watched your shadow chase you from me
frozen in place I thought, "How could this be?"
The pain in my soul from that day on
was so much I wished it gone.
Slowly the sorrow and pain
turned to anger and strain,
but wait!
who's that?
a shadow cast in black
holding out a hand to me
saving my soul from your destiny.
As I rise
I stair into those eyes
beyond the hood
a soul misunderstood.
Something we have in common
standing together
a hand touches my face
such coldness yet a faint shimmer of heat
this soul has saved mine
together we are one
TOGETHER REVENGE WILL BE TAKEN
run dragon of deciet
we are right at the heels of your feet!
My eyes shine again
His heart beats again
Chakahlah
04-27-2006, 08:56 PM
*open mouthed* I really like that one, Drift!! *re-reads it*
Draconis Infernvs
04-28-2006, 09:52 AM
It started for you
a slow rythm to sooth your worries
something strong to hold on to.
That which gives me life gives you strength.
Everyday it beats for that smile
everyday it beats for that touch.
It ended for you
to protect your honor, soul, life
at the last toll it stopped
saving what was taken from you
now it rests
you are safe
nothing more for you
nothing less for me
Chakahlah
04-28-2006, 09:56 AM
*smiles* that one was nice, drift.
Draconis Infernvs
04-28-2006, 10:02 AM
That you chak and fang...
Chakahlah
04-28-2006, 10:07 AM
no probs, drift, you've got a real good talent.
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